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Please review my profile linkedin.com/in/leahbaxter
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Hey there, @leah-baxter! It’s so great to have you in the program with us — you did a great job taking massive imperfect action on your profile and I’d be happy to review it!
GREAT profile photo – please zoom in more so we see more of your face and less of your body. This is because the profile photos show up very small.
Your background image is OK but I really want it to pop. We have a graphic designer for you to use – i’d really like you to email her any logos and your field of work and she will create something custom for you. Please email her 🙂
Headline (words under name):
I do like your headline BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!
About Section:
Right now, a lot of your profile is quotes and testimonials and based on the lesson, you want to write a sales letter to lead them into why they should work with you.
When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
You want to lead them into WHO you work with, HOW you help your clients, and WHY they should work with you. Then, at the end you can provide some short testimonials and THEN a call to action 😉
Here’s a Realtor’s profile as an example:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/
Call to action:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!
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