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LinkedIn Profile URL: https://www.linkedin.com/in/<wbr />josephflahiff/ LinkedIn Industry – 1: Computer Software LinkedIn Industry – 2: Professional training / Consulting LinkedIn Industry – 3: Venture Capital/ Private Equity (maybe) Keyword – 1: Entrepreneur Keyword – 2: Start-up Keyword – 3: Founder Write Headline(s) Here: 1) I help entrepreneurs out of overwhelm and into flow2) Want to spend more time on the things you love without all the hassle that goes with running a business? 3) Want to get out of the overwhelm of running your business and into the flow of the work you love?
Message me now.4) Need a break from all the minutia that comes with running a business?
Message to ask about my FREE Webinar “From Overwhelm to Flow”Step 1: Set the scene: * Who do you want to reach with your summary?
Entrepreneurs who are growing fast and need help by systemizing and learning how to lead people* Who is your perfect audience? Describe that person… (interests, hobbies, family, etc.)
isn’t this the avatar worksheet?
Male 37 years old growing a startup unsure of his leadership, overwhelmed by everything that has to be kept track of. Lives here in Seattle and makes between $110 and $132K (in his previous work). Enjoys the outdoors. Has a wife and 2 kids.*What do you want them to learn or do?
I want them to hire me to help them (done with you) systemize their processes and lead their people.*How do you want them to feel?
I want them to feel freed up from the minutia. I want them to have hope again, and joy in their work.Step 2: Gather Your Raw Content: 
I help ethical entrepreneurs, like you, get out of overwhelm and into flowYou have worked your tail off and your business has grown, but now you are working 70 hours a week, trying to keep all the plates spinning. You are doing stuff that you hate, but it needs to get done to keep the business afloat.
Is that why you started your business? To do stuff you hate to do?
I help entrepreneurs like you put that stuff on autopilot so you can take back more of your time.
The rules of the game change as your business grows. When you started out you probably needed to hold the reins and do everything. But now what enabled you to grow to where you are, is exactly what is stopping you from moving on.
The SYSTEMS you need, your LEADERSHIP approach need to change
I help people like you:
Find the clarity you need
Have the confidence to achieve
Put in place the systems and tools you need to succeedBook a slot on my calendar while you can.
https://calendly.com/joseph-<wbr />flahiff_____watch the testimonial videos at the bottom of this section to hear what clients say_____
MY STORY AND WHY ME:
12 years running my own solo consulting business
25+ years experience leading, training, coaching leaders at all levels
My clients have seen up to 1200% improvement in speed to market (ask for the case study)
Author of 2 books: The NEW Agile Manager and Being AGILE in a Waterfall WorldSERVICES OFFERED GLOBALLY:
1:1 Coaching: I work with successful leaders to help them become the BEST leaders they can be
Group Coaching: I work with small groups of people to achieve optimized results at an achievable price point
Training: Integrated training and coaching programs (I don’t sell training alone, it is a disservice to you)
Keynote Speaker (see topics below)Step 3: Putting It All Together & Write Your LinkedIn Summary: WHAT I DO IN 13 WORDS OR LESS”I help ethical entrepreneurs, like you, get out of overwhelm and into flow” You have worked your tail off and your business has grown.
Now you are working 70 hours a week, trying to keep all the plates spinning.
You are doing stuff that you hate, but it needs to get done to keep the business afloat.
Running from fire to fire. You want to, NEED to scale but you are, “too busy.”
Is this why you started your business?
To do stuff you hate to do?
To be stressed out?
To be working long hours?The rules of the game change as your business grows.
What enabled you to grow to where you are, is exactly what is stopping you from moving on.
I help entrepreneurs like you breakthrough to the next level of success and put that stuff on autopilot so you can take back more of your time.
So you can scale, so you can work where you want, when you want, how you want, and with whom you want!
I help people like you:
Find the clarity you need
Have the confidence to achieve
Put in place the systems and tools you need to succeedBook a slot on my calendar while you can.
https://calendly.com/joseph-<wbr />flahiff_____watch the testimonial videos at the bottom of this section to hear what clients say_____
MY STORY AND WHY ME:
12 years running my own solo consulting business
25+ years experience leading, training, coaching leaders at all levels
My clients have seen up to 1200% improvement in speed to market (ask for the case study)
Author of 2 books: The NEW Agile Manager and Being AGILE in a Waterfall WorldVISIT:
https://www.facebook.com/<wbr />RealJosephFlahiff
https://www.Josephflahiff.com
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Hi @joseph! Well done on completing your profile accelerator!! In order to receive 100% feedback, you must add all of that raw information into your actual LinkedIn page.
This is so I can provide you feedback on:
- your profile photo
- background photo
- headline
- summary
Once you have done so, please make a new post for feedback in this forum topic and provide a direct link to your profile so I can then provide you feedback.
If you don’t know how to provide a direct link to your LinkedIn profile:
- click on ‘tutorials’ on the left hand side of this screen
- watch the first video
I’m looking forward to providing you feedback soon 🙂
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I don’t know how that extra HTML code got in there soory.
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@joseph, I can already tell you’re going to be a rockstar in the program!! GREAT work.
Background photo and profile photo both look very professional and engaging!
Is there a way for you to move your profile photo a bit to the right so there’s not as much blue background and your face is centered? If this isn’t possible, no worries.
Headline:
SUPER job. I revamped it down below.
I also wanted to make one of my own for you – if you like it, feel free to use it!
Want To GROW Your Business To New Heights WITHOUT Running Into Overwhelm? ☆ Helping Entrepreneurs Succeed ☆☞ Message Me!
Summary:
Maybe you could put “a” or “the” after flow.
“I help ethical entrepreneurs, like you, get out of overwhelm and into flow”
The following in a call to action and should be at the end of your message:
Book a slot on my calendar while you can.
https://calendly.com/joseph-flahiff_____watch the testimonial videos at the bottom of this section to hear what clients say_____
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If you’ve helped a client, add that in somewhere like:
One of my clients was working 80 HOURS a week and with my help, his company accumulated $______ PROFIT etc etc!
Sounds great, right??
(Joseph, that is just an example but if you add something short and sweet like that, it could be very powerful)
EXCELLENT job with your sales letter 🙂
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