linked in profile review

[Kurt Axt]

https://www.linkedin.com/feed/?trk=nav_logo

@negeen-dargahi

[n d]

Hi @kurt-axt, looks like you provided a general link to LinkedIn. You need to send me a link to your actual profile. To do that:

• on this page click on ‘tutorials’ on the left side of this screen on app.hecp.com
• watch the FIRST video
• submit another post with a link to your profile

[Kurt Axt]

https://www.linkedin.com/in/kurt-axt-4985928a/    @negeen-dargahi

Is this right?

[n d]

Hey @kurt-axt! Yes, I can see it! Nice work taking action on your LinkedIn profile!

Your background photo seems a little cut-off. I would consider having our graphic designer resize it for you OR have her create you a new one. To do that:

Email her at Lindsey@coredm.com and tell her a little about your field of business and what you would like and she will help create that for you!
Also, if you can attach a copy of your LI profile photo in the email as well, Lindsey can add in a white background for your profile photo so it really pops! ALSO, zoom in more on your profile photo so we see more of your face.

Headline:
Looks GREAT!!

Summary:

Currently, you have lots of “i” and you want to change that to “you” and direct your message to THEM.

You also need more content.

Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”

THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
2 sentences how are you different than your competitors

Who you like to work with

Great call to action!!

Feel free to look at these profile from members —> look at the way they formatted their points! Do that!!

https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

Nice!

 

 

 

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