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Hi @mindy-yount, you did a really nice job on your profile accelerator! Below is my feedback:
Excellent work with your:
- background image
- profile photo
Headline (words under name):
Right now, you currently have written “Real Estate Agent at eXp Realty” but instead, let’s really utilize this space! How about something like this:
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!
OR fill this out:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:
Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important.
How about you ask 3 POWERFUL pain point questions your clients struggle with.
What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?” THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
I recommend copying Kent’s summary outline and adding your own information to it. This will really help with organizing your points.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Call To Action:
You need one!
If you’re ready for [NEED] then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me in your revision! 🙂
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