4 years, 9 months ago-
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Hi @julie-fink, first off, welcome back to the program and nice work taking action on your profile!
Below is my feedback on changes I’d like you to make:
Your current profile photo is not very professional. You have a great smile but i’d like you to have a better quality photo.
When you do find a better photo, would you please email it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, ask her to add a white background for you. Once she sends the photo back, please zoom in more so we can see your face clearly.
You need a banner image – I’d also like you to email Lindsey, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better!
Headline:
Your headline is the best piece of real estate on your profile. Let’s make it stand out. How about this:
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!
About section:
I’d like you to replace “my” and “I” with “you” — in some parts in the middle there’s too much emphasis on you and not enough on them.
Your content is GREAT, but some of the paragraphs are a bit chunky. If you could copy the format of the profile below and add your own content this would help with organization/formatting.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/
CALL TO ACTION looks good! Here’s another recommendation:
If you’re READY for _______ message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Fantastic job!!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!
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I re sent the next draft of the profile. I will get the photo done by tomorrow. I emailed Lindsey on the banner help.
Thanks Negeen.
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Looks AWESOME, @julie-fink!! Great job taking immediate action!
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