5 years, 4 months ago-
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Please review my profile. Thanks! @negeen-dargahi @kent-littlejohn
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Hi @jordan-mann!! First off, NICE work on your profile. Below is my feedback:
Profile Photo: While I love your smiling face in the photo, having your body turned to the side is not alpha and not direct. I recommend taking a photo of yourself head on. Zoom in so we see more of your face.
You can even email your updated image to our graphic designer, Lindsey, and she can add a white background for you.
I don’t like your background photo very much. It’s not professional. I’d also like you to email our graphic designer and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better.
Your headline is on the RIGHT path!! Nice work. I just want it to look a bit nicer. How about this:
Want To GROW Your Profit Margin WITHOUT Losing Money? ☆EXPERT Advisor Helping Clients Gain Control☆☞MSG Me!
(You can change it up if you’d like but everything can be copy and pasted into your headline slot and the icons will show up)
Summary:
Get rid of any “&” symbols and write it out.
Is “mod” short for something? If so, write it out. Same with “comp”.
I LOVE your content.
Good work 🙂
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