Jim Perry’s 30 second Infomercial

[James Perry]

Here is my (1 minnute 23 seconds) 30 second infomercial for your critique.  Thank you, Jim Perry

[n d]

Hey there @james-perry! All of this would have been PERFECT if you had eye contact with the camera. Right now we see your eyes looking down and reading. Try your best to memorize a few times before filming and have eye contact with the camera. You can even put your computer next to your camera so that you’re able to have your eyes in the direction of the lens.

Good work! Have I approved your script? Just want to double check.

[James Perry]

Yes, you approved it last week. I do not like it though because I look like I am reading a script. I ammemorizing it and going to refilm it tomorrow morning. Thanks, Jim

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