Hey @mark-clark, you did a really nice job with your first infomercial submission!
You could really have some stronger pain point questions, in my opinion.
GOOD first pain point question. You need two more. How about:
Do you want QUALIFIED offers looking at your property?
Need ______ but don’t know where to start?
If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!
Hi, I’m @mark-clark and I am a realtor helping clients with ___ in ______area.
(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)
(you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)
If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.
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