Informercial Please Review

[John Sweeney]

Are you ready to purchase your dream home, you have been planning and working toward this for years? But you are concerned about all the details that go with the purchase of a home. I specialize in helping buyers just like you find that dream home and helping them take care of all the details.

I will be with you all the way from finding the home, to helping take care of any inspections, or home viewings.  Call me today at 731-435-1155, to start your trip to the dream home.

[n d]

Hi @john-sweeney, this is a great start but you still need a bit more information for your infomercial.

I’d like you to fill out this template below to help you come up with more talking points:

How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…

Are you WANTING _________?
Do you NEED __________?

Want __________?

(after you ask 3 questions)

If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

(you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

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Please tag me in your revision 🙂

[John Sweeney]

Are you wanting to purchase your dream home?

Do You need help finding this home?

Do you want someone to guide you through the process?

Hi I am, John Sweeney and I am the best at helping clients just like you get that dream home.

It all begins with me listening to YOU describe this dream home.  After listening, I restate for clarity. Then I take your needs and wants in this home and use my talent to find the perfect home. From the location of the home, to all necessary details, I am at your side!

If you want the best agent then message me at

Then message me here on Linkedin to see if we are a good fit

 

[n d]

Hi @john-sweeney, nice work! A few tweaks I’d like you to make in order to make your message powerful!

Are you READY to find your dream home?

Do you want an EXPERT and patient realtor to help you during the entire home buying process?

Want to be in the loop 100% of the way?

If that sounds like you, you came to the right person.

Hi I am, John Sweeney and I am the best at helping clients just like you GET your ideal home.

I make sure my clients always feel heard when it comes to their home qualifications! You can rest assured that i will find the PERFECT home for you within your price range. I make sure we are on the same page the whole way! I have lots of resources to make sure you see new properties that become available. YOU are working with the best!

If you’re READY to get started on the home buying process, message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

 

[John Sweeney]

Thanks, Should I go ahead and make the 30 sec0nd informercial?

 

 

[n d]

Hi @john-sweeney! Yes, please look below:

Here are your next steps:

Halle made a very helpful video on how to record your infomercial.

It is called “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy Module.

Here is also an example of what it should sound like. Of course, this is a high-quality version but yours does NOT have to be this
high quality. Just look at the angle of the video and the lighting.

 

[John Sweeney]

Please review my informercial

 

Here is link https://youtu.be/pv5VJ3rjlSk

[John Sweeney]

Please review informercial

 

Here is link https://youtu.be/pv5VJ3rjlSk

[n d]

Hi there, @john-sweeney! This looks good. If you choose to refilm, please turn your phone horizontally and try to slip in a smile here and there so that you are approachable and engaging.

Overall, this video works as well and great job taking action!!!

🙂

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