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      Shamayah Neveling
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        @shamayah.s@gmail.com
        • Do you want more patients coming in the door and have them spend more?
        • Would you like to become known as an authority in your industry?
        • Want to leverage the power of a book to boost your practice?

        If you answered ‘YES’ to any of these questions, you came to the right place!

        I’m Shamayah and I am a business strategist.

        I help dentists, chiropractors and entrepreneurs like you, to write, publish and launch their book without a huge investment in time and money – using the magic of collaboration.

        What’s more, once we’ve made you a bestselling author, we’ll work with you to grow your practice and increase your income.

        (You’ll be amazed to see what a game changer having a book can be. – should it leave this in or take it out? It’s now 40 sec. without this sentence it will be 35 seconds.)

        If you’re READY to catapult your practice to the next level, message me on LinkedIn to see if we can work together.

        @amanda-hendrickson @negeen-dargahi

      • #24280

        Anonymous
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          Hi @shamayah-neveling

          GREAT job!

          Let’s re-word your first pain point so it flows better and sounds natural.

          “Do you want more patients coming in the door and have them spend more?”

          Instead, you can just say “Do you want more patients coming through YOUR door?” No need to add “and spending more”

          I say add “You’ll be amazed to see what a game changer having a book can be!” Your 30 sec infomercial CAN be longer than 30 seconds. 30-60 seconds is best.

          AWESOME job!

           

           

           

        • #24296

          Shamayah Neveling
          Participant
            @shamayah.s@gmail.com

            Thank you @amanda-hendrickson for your great feedback and quick reply!

             

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