infomercial script review

[Ann Behrens]

Are you wanting to sell your home?

Do you want to take advantage of this strong seller’s market?

Is the thought of juggling a full schedule and selling your home completely overwhelming?

 

If you answered “yes” to those questions, you came to the right place.

Hello my name is Ann Behrens, I’m an experienced listing agent with Coldwell Banker helping clients sell their home for top dollar with ease.

Combining my in-depth market knowledge with cutting edge marketing strategies, I will highlight the best features of your home to attract the perfect buyer. I will expertly manage the marketing, negotiations, contingencies, complicated paperwork, and all details from beginning to end while keeping you informed every step of the way.

Let me be the key to your real estate needs! Call me and let’s chat- 973-769-8719.

 

[n d]

Hi @ann-behrens, really nice job taking action on your infomercial! I really like that you started off asking 3 questions.

I feel that you could go a bit stronger with a starting question than “Are you wanting to sell your home?”

How about something a bit deeper such as:

“Have you been thinking about selling your home, but don’t know where to even begin?”

I’d like to introduce your bigger paragraph by saying:

“When clients like YOU work with me, I utilize my in-depth market knowledge with cutting edge marketing strategies. This will highlight the BEST features of your home to attract the perfect (and QUALIFIED) buyer!

(everything after looks good)

You need a stronger call to action. I want you to really think about your Perfect Client and their pain points.

If you’re READY to _________ message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

 

[Ann Behrens]

Have you been thinking about selling your home, but don’t know where to even begin?

Do you want to take advantage of this strong seller’s market?

Is the thought of juggling a full schedule and selling your home completely overwhelming?

If you answered “yes” to those questions, you came to the right place.

Hello my name is Ann Behrens, I’m an experienced listing agent with Coldwell Banker helping clients sell their home for top dollar with ease.

When clients like YOU work with me, as your trusted advisor, together we review market data, pricing, and cutting edge marketing strategies to highlight the best features of your home to attract the perfect buyer. I will expertly manage the marketing, negotiations, contingencies, complicated paperwork, and all details from beginning to end while keeping you informed every step of the way.

If you’re READY for expert guidance selling your home, call me at 973-769-8719 or  message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

[n d]

Looks awesome @ann-behrens! Nice job implementing those changes.

Here are your next steps:

Halle made a very helpful video on how to record your infomercial.

It is called “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy Module.

Here is also an example of what it should sound like. Of course, this is a high-quality version but yours does NOT have to be this
high quality. Just look at the angle of the video and the lighting.

 

[Ann Behrens]

Hi Negeen,

Can you take a look at the video and let me know if I need to make a change.

[n d]

WOW @ann-behrens, you are an absolute natural in front of the camera! This is such a comforting video and I know that nervous clients or those who are hesitant are going to feel CONFIDENT working with you. Excellent job!

 

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