Infomercial Review

[Nicole Yamada]

Hi!

Here’s a draft of my infomercial.  Would love feedback.

Do you want more out of your life?  Do you need another source of income, but don’t have the time or growth potential in your current job?  Do you want a way out of the rat race? If you answered YES to these questions, then you came to the right place!  

Hi, I’m Nicole Yamada and I am a professional trainer helping clients to build their own team to produce passive income streams.  My company values, trains and rewards motivated individuals with a growth mindset. Message me to find out how to tap into an opportunity with limitless earning potential.

Thank you!

Nicole

@negeen-dargahi

@halle-eavelyn

 

 

 

[n d]

Hi @nicole-yamada-2! You did a REALLY great job on your infomercial! Few things:

A really nice job on your pain point questions! Let’s take out the “do” out of the beginning of each to add a bit of variety. I also want to change the wording on the 2nd question.

How do you like this:

Are you wanting MORE out of your life?

Do you need another source of income, but don’t have the time or growth potential in your current job?

Ready to find a way OUT of the rat race? (this last question honestly may not even need to change but I figured I’d give it a jab)

Fix:

“helping clients to build” to “helping clients build”

Everything else is short and sweet! Nice work!

If you have questions on filming:

Watch Halle’s video called: “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bulls eye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.

[Nicole Yamada]

Thanks @negeen-dargahi!  I really appreciate all your help and positivity!  Have a wonderful day!

 

[n d]

Anytime, @nicole-yamada-2 🙂 you’re doing great!

[Nicole Yamada]

Hi @negeen-dargahi!

I videoed myself for my infomercial.  It’s 37 seconds.  I made it the lowest quality and resolution possible to make the file smaller, but it’s still too big.  How can I make it smaller so I can upload it for you to review?

 

[n d]

Hi @nicole-yamada-2, nice job! Okay, no problem! I can help.

Also, no worries if the video exceeds 30 seconds.

We just don’t want it surpassing 3 minutes.

You can email it to me at negeen@coredm.com  and we can see if that works!

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