6 years, 3 months ago-
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Negeen,
I like your idea, and this is probably a minute and 30 seconds.
Pat Ford
Infomercial revised to add your suggestions, 3 questions, then 3 ways I can help and the other language.
- Want amazing results in your Real estate experience?
- Want an agent that will call you back?
- Do you want someone who will listen to your needs?
If this sounds like you… I know EXACTLY how to help.
Hi, I’m Pat Ford and I am an agent with Crye-Leike Realtors in Spring Hill, TN helping clients with their real estate needs through counseling to determine exactly what you need now to sell your home.
- A marketing plan tailored to place your home in the best market position for sell.
- Weekly updates to keep you informed on our progress towards the sale of your home.
If you are wanting excellent service from your agent, then text or call me TODAY at 615 512-7350 to see if we’re a good fit.
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MUCH better, @pat-ford!
When you get to “a marketing plan” I want you to say it in a complete sentence like you are still talking to them like “I will get you a ______.”
Everything else looks great 🙂
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Negeen,
How does this sound?
I have built a Marketing plan with scheduled activities from installation of the for sale sign, all the marketing activities to be performed such as advertising on the many websites affiliated with Crye-Leike, such as Realtor.com, homes.com, landwatch.com, homefacts.com and many more! Just listed cards will be mailed to the neighborhood, Facebook advertising, new listing advertising to the Top agents, and feedback to you from showings. All of this to get you the highest possible price with the fewest possible issues in the shortest time with a SOLD sign in your yard!
Pat Ford
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How about:
“With my marketing plan, you will get ______, _______, AND _____! Yes, you heard right! You will be taken care of ..getting _______.
Keep it short, sweet and coherent 🙂
Great work!
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Yes, @pat-ford – please don’t reinvent the wheel now, because your previous version without all that new copy was much cleaner!
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Negeen and Halle,
How does this sound?
I have built a Marketing plan that gets maximum internet exposure, just listed cards and marketing to the TOP agents in the area! Yes, this is part of my marketing plan! You will provided the best of service with my commitment to excellence!
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The last sentence should be:
You will be provided the best of service with my commitment to excellence!
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Hi @pat-ford, much better! When you say “just listed cards” is that cards that say “just listed” — wanted to clarify!
Yes, this is the part to really provide them with “look what you’ll get when you work with me”!
Very nice work!
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Hello Negeen,
Will this work?
- Want amazing results in your Real estate experience?
- Want an agent that will call you back?
- Do you want someone who will listen to your needs?
- If this sounds like you… I know EXACTLY how to help.
Hi, I’m Pat Ford and I am an agent with Crye-Leike Realtors in Spring Hill, TN helping clients with their real estate needs through counseling to determine exactly what you need now to sell your home.
- My marketing plan is tailored to place your home in the best market position to sell and get you the highest possible price, in the shortest time, with little or no hassles!
- Also I give weekly updates to keep you informed on our progress towards the sale of your home.
If you are wanting excellent service from your agent, then text or call me TODAY at 615 512-7350 to see if we’re a good fit.
This could be 2 minutes unless I speak fast!
Pat Ford
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Hi @pat-ford, super proud of you! This, in my opinion, looks great!
Practice a few times before you film and that will help, as far as timing goes. It’s okay, please try your best not to go over 2min. 1min 50sec is ideal, but of course, we don’t want it to read rushed. Let’s see how it looks once it’s filmed 🙂
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