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Hi @meredith-erickson! NICE start on your infomercial!!
Below I’ve copied and pasted it and provided feedback in certain parts. I mainly want you to introduce yourself and I revised a few parts.
Do you want your next purchase or sale to be stress free? (Meredith, I want you to say EITHER purchase OR sale, not both. Keep it VERY focused.)
Want a broker that can help to create the “look” that today’s buyers are searching for? (I took out the negotiating part because it became a run on sentence)
Sound too good to be true? It might sound like that but after 34 years of experience, you came to the right person!
Hi, I’m @meredith-erickson and I am a _______ helping YOU ________.
When YOU work with me, you get current statistics on market conditions, laws and upcoming developments. Your time is valuable! I know this and make sure to save you time and money by doing all the research and legwork for you. (I replaced “i” with “you” to keep it on them)
What’s better? You can stop worrying about the contingencies and complicated paperwork. My expert advice on pricing and staging will set you apart from any competition – without you having to lift a finger. Yes! You heard that right!
So if you’re ready to _______ message me TODAY here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
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