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[Kimberly Kelly]

Are you wanting to sell your house or a piece of property?
Do you need someone that will work hard for you, and look out for your best interest?
What kind of agent are you looking for?
If you answered yes to those questions, you came to the right place.
I work North Texas Region. We have been helping people like you, for 22 years.
If you want call me!
Or, message me here on linkedin to see if we are a good fit.

[n d]

Hey there @kimberly-kelly, this looks GOOD!

I don’t like your 3rd question “What kind of agent are you looking for?” very much – too broad.

How about: Do you want QUALIFIED buyers looking at your home?

After you say “If you answered yes to those questions, you came to the right place.”

Say…

Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

Let’s keep it alpha and avoid “if you want” terms because then it puts the conversation and decision in their hands.

If you are ready for [PAIN POINT] then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

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