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I am not sure if this is the right place. 30-second commercial. Would something like this work?
You need a will but know it costs too much. Concerned because your small business must sign a contract. Easy & affordable. That is what we do. Get it done at gaelord.wearelegalshield.com
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Hi @gae-callaway! You posted in the RIGHT place 🙂 nice job taking action.
What you wrote is too short. Fill out this template – this will be very helpful:
How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…
Are you WANTING _________?
Do you NEED __________?Want __________?
(after you ask 3 questions)
If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!
Hi, I’m [NAME] and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.
(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)
(you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)
If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.
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@negeen-dargahi Was this after I had added more or is it still not the best? Gae
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Hi @gae-callaway. Please revise what you wrote based on my feedback and tag me in your revision.
Thank you!
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@gae-callaway, you requested feedback for your infomercial script and my feedback is above. If you want me to look at your profile, please make a new post in the correct forum and I’d be happy to take a look!
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