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INORMERCIAL
Want to live the American Dream?
Want to own your own home?
Wrestling with stress, with fear?
Looking at a long list of homes daily?
Stuck on moving forward? NEED A REALTOR
I’m your Realtor….Welcome Home
I AM FREE….. I will remove your fear, your stress, review the entire transaction process with you, complete all your paperwork, and find homes to show you. Your job is to get qualified through a lender, and be available to view the homes you have selected from the list I sent you.
I prepare the paperwork …you sign the paperwork.. You close and off you go….I ‘ll lead you home!
I just made your realty dreams a reality.. I go beyond the sale. .AT NO COST TO YOU.
CALL ME ANY TIME: #7037129545 Shirley Morris #7037129545 -
Hi @shirley-morris! Nice job taking action on your infomercial! You’ve got some good stuff here but there needs to be better organization of your points. There’s also a lot of “i” that you’re using and not enough “you”.
I’d like you to fill out this template:
How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…
Are you WANTING _________?
Do you NEED __________?Want __________?
(after you ask 3 questions)
If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!
Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.
(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)
(you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)
If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.
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