https://www.linkedin.com/in/susan-sue-hooper-b7312a100/

[Susan Hooper]

It’s getting late.  The type is blurring on my screen.  Please disregard my last quention.  I found my profile in my Microsoft Wood file.  Should I put the long profile on linkdin?  If so, do I copy and paste it in?

[Anonymous]

Hi @susan-hooper!

Please make sure you are posting in the correct forum. This is a LinkedIn questions forum and your post should really be in the LinkedIn Profile Review forum. That way we can help you more efficiently and you can check out the profiles of other people in the program. With that being said, here is my feedback on your profile:

Please choose either Susan Hooper or Sue Hooper for your name. Susan “Sue” Hooper does not look good.

I like your profile photo but your background could use some work. It’s a nice house but it’s also cut off which makes it look not so nice.

We actually have a full-time graphic designer who can help create this for you!
All you have to do is:

Email her at Lindsey@coredm.com and tell her a little about your field of business and what you would like and she will help create that for you!
Also, if you can, attach a copy of your LI profile photo in the email as well, Lindsey can add in a white background for your profile photo so it really pops! Just ask her to do this as well as the background.

Headline:
This needs work. Try filling this template out and using it:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

Summary:

(examples below)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

You don’t have enough information here, please refer to those examples of what we want your profile to look like!

Remember you don’t want your LinkedIn to look like a resume. Make sure you go through the LinkedIn Profile Accelerator in the Mindset and Momentum Module.

Outline of summary you can follow and fill in:

The first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”

THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
2 sentences how are you different than your competitors

Who you like to work with

Then add a call to action with your contact info:

If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!

PLEASE TAG ME IN YOUR REVISION! (In The LinkedIn Profile Review Forum PLEASE)

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