Hero Story title changes

[Laura Barker]

@halle-eavelyn  @negeen-dargahi  I sent my story to an editor on Fiverr and she suggested that I make a change in my title.  I have some options below.  I would love your input!

Thanks!

1. After LOSING NEARLY EVERYTHING (INCLUDING MY LIFE), I Had an EPIPHANY That Has Allowed Me to OVERCOME All Obstacles and ACHIEVE Phenomenal Success Doing What I Love Most – HELPING PEOPLE!

2. How Overcoming Obstacles by Embracing Change Saved My Life and Propelled Me to Phenomenal Success in Business and Life!

3. How OVERCOMING Obstacles by EMBRACING CHANGE Saved My Life and Propelled Me to PHENOMENAL SUCCESS Doing What I Love Most – HELPING PEOPLE!

4. By EMBRACING CHANGE, I learned how to overcome LOSING NEARLY EVERYTHING (INCLUDING MY LIFE) to ACHIEVE PHENOMENAL SUCCESS DOING WHAT I LOVE MOST – HELPING PEOPLE!

[Laura Barker]

@negeen-dargahi – Can you please take a look at these revised titles following Kent’s model?

1.  How I OVERCAME

Losing Nearly EVERYTHING

(EVERYTHING – Including my LIFE!)

And LIVED to Create Not One –

But TWO SUCCESSFUL BUSINESSES

Doing what I LOVE MOST:

EMPOWERING PEOPLE!

(And how YOU can do the SAME -without the pain)!

[n d]

Hi @laura-barker!

I like the updated headline you just posted. I’m worried about the length – if that is an issue for you, I would consider:

1.  How I OVERCAME

Losing Nearly EVERYTHING

(Including my LIFE!)

And LIVED to Create Two SUCCESSFUL Businesses

(And how YOU can do the SAME -without the pain)!

 

[Laura Barker]

@negeen-dargahi YOU ROCK! I love it.  Thanks!

 

[Halle Eavelyn]

I LOVE IT, TOO!!!!

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