Hero story Kathryn Rimstidt Review

[Kathryn Rimstidt]

I’ve edited my hero story and would very much appreciate more feedback.  I know there might be “errors” still, but mostly am wondering if you can give me feedback about next steps.  I worked to make it more focused and cut out some “extra” bits and all as you’d suggested @halle-eavelyn.  I also thought you, @jennifer-martin might have suggestions as well, given you have been my check-in person with the phone calls.  Then, once I have more general suggestions/whether I’m more “on track,” and can change those bigger things, I can do more of the little-bits of editing to clarify a sentence, look for word errors, etc.

Thanks and with deep love-Kathryn

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