Hero Story- Feedback Please

[Frances Schlosstein]

I would like your feedback before sending off to clients for review as I will only have one chance with them…. Do you think it is too long.  Any suggestions?  Thank you.

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[n d]

Thank you for submitting your hero story, @frances-schlosstein!

I’m going to tag in @halle-eavelyn so she can provide you with feedback.

[Frances Schlosstein]

@halle-eavelyn @negeen-dargahi

Hi Halle and Naegeen,

I have not received any feedback on my Hero story and its been almost 2 weeks. Please review the attachment as I made changes from the first version.  Would like your feedback and want to refine before sending out to clients  for feedback.  Thank you so much.  Frances

[n d]

Hi @frances-schlosstein, I just spoke with Halle and she is currently in the process of providing feedback on other hero stories and will get to yours in a few days.

Please keep moving forward!! You will get tagged when it is ready.

 

[Halle Eavelyn]

Hi< Frances –

This ISN’T your Hero Story. It’s not too long, but it IS a series of answers, and now your next step is to craft this material into your Hero Story. There’s training on how to do this in the next lesson – AND you can review many many other Hero Stories in this very forum to see the ones we suggest as examples. You may also want to read my case study on Glo Reber, which is in this forum as well.

Please tag me on the full first draft, ok? On the plus side, it’s not too long!! Just remember… STORY beats fact every time. It’s not an autobiography, it’s select moments of your life placed strategically. Make sense???

cc. @negeen-dargahi; @amanda-hendrickson

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