Hero Story

[Robert Jenkins]

Please review my first draft of my Hero Story.

 

Thanks,

Robert

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[n d]

Hi @robert-jenkins! Nice job taking action!!

I recommend you take a look at @kent-littlejohn and @anthony-simonie hero story before submitting your hero story for review.

I also recommend you look at the case study @halle-eavelyn made for Glo Reber, which is in the “Hero Story” forum in the support forum.

Just based on looking at your hero story, I know that you can add a lot more content and depth to your great story 🙂

Once you do this and are confident that your hero story is ready for review, please let me know and I’ll make sure Halle takes a look at it.

[Halle Eavelyn]

Hey, @robert-jenkins – I’m wondering if you completed your next draft? Just a heads up that I agree with ALL Negeen’s comments.  And… we have the Hero Story Overview Path in both this forum (as a pinned post) and in the training.

The big thing that is missing from your story is CONFLICT and telling the buyers WHAT’S IN IT FOR THEM.  Your title says it all: My Path To My Island Dream Home”  and my question is, why should your audience care? Make sure you watch my BENEFITS MARKETING and BENEFITS MARKETING II videos in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bulls eye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.

Great job taking Massive ImperfeCT Action!!

[Robert Jenkins]

I’ve actually already published my Hero Story.  See attached.

Thanks,

Robert

 

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[Halle Eavelyn]

@robert-jenkins, take a look at my notes and consider reviewing your Hero Story again – I’m SO proud of you for taking Massive Imperfect Action AND I think the next version would be even better!!

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