Here is my LinkedIn profile for Review

[Ja Gold]

https://www.linkedin.com/in/jan-h-goldberg/

Feedback welcomed!

[n d]

Hi @jan-goldberg, welcome to the program and nice work taking action on your profile! Happy to provide you with feedback, below:

Profile Photo:

What you currently have is not as high of quality as I would like to see. Try having someone take a photo of you with a better quality camera (try iPhone or a camera) and zoom out so your face isn’t cut off. Smiling is good for profile photos, so good on that!

I don’t like your background photo very much. It’s very low quality.

I’d like you to email our graphic designer and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better for you to use!!

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline:

GREAT work!!!

Summary:

While you’re on the right path, there needs to be more information and better organization to lead them effortlessly through your sales letter.

Please refer to these profiles from other realtors in the program. Copy the FORMAT/outline and pay attention to the way they lead you through their profile.

They detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

Even though you are listing the items, you want to shorten it up. Here’s how a sentence could look.

The market is SATURATED by harmful facial products… when YOU work with me, I guarantee ________.

Sounds great right?

You could start your summary off asking 3 short and sweet and POWERFUL pain point questions!

Refer back to the lesson notes and the examples I provided!

Call To Action:

You need one!

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me in your revision 🙂

[Ja Gold]

Check out my revised layout. https://www.linkedin.com/in/jan-h-goldberg/

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