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I just completed my LinkedIn profile. Could I please get your feedback.
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Hey @quen-barton!
Nice work taking massive imperfect action on your profile! Below is my feedback:
Do you have a profile photo that is more clear? Can you email your picture to our graphic designer and have her add in a white background for you —>
Please have her create a cover photo (background photo) for you too!
Headline (words under your name) — this needs work and I’d like to you fill this out and add it to that location:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:(examples below)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/You don’t really have enough information and I’d like you to refer to those examples of what we want your profile to look like!
Outline of summary you can follow and fill in:
Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”
- THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
2 sentences how are you different than your competitors
Who you like to work with
Then add a call to action with your contact info:
If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!
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Hey @quen-barton!
Nice work taking massive imperfect action on your profile! Below is my feedback:
Can you email your profile picture to our graphic designer and have her add in a white background for you —>
Lindsey@coredm.comHeadline (words under your name) — this needs work and I’d like to you fill this out and add it to that location:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:(examples below)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/You don’t really have enough information and I’d like you to refer to those examples of what we want your profile to look like!
Outline of summary you can follow and fill in:
Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”
- THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
2 sentences how are you different than your competitors
Who you like to work with
Then add a call to action with your contact info:
If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!
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Hi @quen-barton, would you mind putting this in your actual LI profile and sending me the link? I want to see this in your profile to it’s entirety so I can provide you adequate feedback. Also, did you send an email to our graphic designer??
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I have incorporated new updates to my LinkedIn profile, which is located at:
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Excellent work, @quen-barton!! I LOVE your content, very informative and professional! Okay, so for your profile photo, you really want to take a photo of you at eye level with the camera. I’d like you to take one and then send that photo to Lindsey@coredm.com and have her not only add a white background in that photo for you… but ALSO have her create a background photo for you LI page.
Great work 🙂
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