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Hi @grace-colon! Nice job taking action on your profile! Below is my feedback:
Your cover photo could be better.
Can you email your picture to our graphic designer and tell her a little bit about your field of business so she can create something better for you?
Headline (words under your name) — this needs work and I’d like to you fill this out and add it to that location:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [Location]☆☞MSG Me!Summary:
(examples below)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/You don’t have enough information and I’d like you to refer to those examples of what we want your profile to look like!
Outline of summary you can follow and fill in:
Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”
THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
2 sentences how are you different than your competitorsWho you like to work with
Then add a call to action with your contact info:
If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!
Grace, if you need to copy the format of the examples, please do so!
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Hi Negeen,
I completed my linkedin profile. Can you check it out and let me know if I should change anything please?
Thank you,
Grace
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Hi @grace-colon! Nice job taking action on revising. Below is my feedback:
Did you email Lindsey about creating a new background photo for you? Please make sure to do that if you haven’t already.
Great headline!!
Your first paragraph is a little chunky, just copy and paste this:
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WHAT I DO IN 12 WORDS OR LESS.
” I deliver quality, in-depth real estate services for Palm Beach County buyers.”
Essentially…
You can focus on YOUR needs INSTEAD of searching endless hours and doing the tedious paperwork.
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Everything else looks great! Nice work 🙂
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