First Draft of Infomercial text

[Sarah Graham]

Hi Negeen  –  In your instructions you said to chose the “T” in a box.  Did not see a box with a T.

Here is the copy.  I know it is from the Buyer only side.  That is really what I do. Working on building the Listing Side credentials.

Sarah R. Graham Infomercial for Linked In

 

Charleston is a great place to live!  You can live at the beach or downtown. On James Island or close in West Ashley or Far Out West Ashley or Summerville or ….. So many great choices!  Where do you start looking? Where will you find the Very best house that meets the needs of your family or your dream retirement lifestyle??

That is where I come in😊   Having grown up in Charleston I can help you navigate the map of neighborhoods and schools and waterways and beaches.   As a licensed realtor who has helped buyers all over the greater Charleston area and who is involved in community affairs I am aware of what is on the horizon for development or renovation.  Most importantly if I don’t know an answer to your question, I know who to call within my network to find the answers!

Before any of this matters, we must do Step One in my Step-by-Step process.  You talk and I listen!!  Working through the details of a Buyer Survey will separate your list of absolute “Must Haves” from the  “Would Really Like to Haves”.  Once we talk it through and are both crystal clear on your vision for the location, lifestyle, home design, budget and timeline for your new home purchase, I can get to work.

Let’s start the process!  Give me a call at 843 693 0620 or send an email to sarahrgraham@kw.com and I will send you The Step-by-Step Buyer’s Plan. Your vision is my blueprint. Let’s start the search for your new home!  Look forward to talking with you soon and to becoming YOUR Charleston Realtor!

 

 

[n d]

Hi, @sarah-graham, you did a really nice job on your infomercial! No worries on the ‘T’, I can see your text clearly. In the future, when you see the text box there is a ‘Toolbar Toggle’ that looks like little squares. If you click on that, you’ll see the clipboard.

Moving on, I can tell you know your area and know your client!

This information you provided in your infomercial will benefit from better organization.

How about you fill out the template below so we can condense your infomercial and really provide them with information on what you do and HOW you can help them. I also recommend shortening down your call to action.

Look below and fill this out:

How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…

Are you WANTING _________?
Do you NEED __________?

Want __________?

(after you ask 3 questions)

If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

(you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

Tag me in your revision 🙂

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