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      Bonnie Ard
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        @bonnie.ard@mygulfre.com

        ” Do you want your Next Deal to be Stress-Free? Do you want to Dominate all the Negotiations? Does this sound too goo to be true? It might sound like that, but after 16 years of experience, I will tell you that people can have their cake and eat it, too- when it comes to Real Estate, at least.

        I give my clients up-to-date Education on market conditions, government regulations and upcoming developments. I will save you Valuable Time and $ by ONLY viewing Properties that best suit your requirements.

        Stop worrying about the contingencies and complicated paperwork, My expert adviec on Pricing & Staging will set you apart from ANY competition -without you having to lift a finger.

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        n d
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          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @bonnie-ard, this is a really good start!!

          After the first paragraph, when you tell them you can help them, make sure you introduce yourself and what you do.

          Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

          (you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

          You also need a call to action:

          If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

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