Do I have to be in my infomercial?

[HECProgram Admin]

Ideally, yes.

We highly recommend being in your own infomercial so your message is conveyed clearly and powerfully.

Yes, we know you hate your [smile/voice/face/extra pounds/how you look in a tie/insert your issue here].

We don’t, though!! And you have that same look when you are out in the world, so we NEED IT to be on camera!!  

When people work with you, it’s because they like or even love you DESPITE your perceived flaw! Stop procrastinating and get on camera!  You’ll be much better than you think!

• This topic was modified 6 years, 5 months ago by HECProgram Admin.

[Thomas Rasmussen]

https://youtu.be/-0FMiHpEZt0

@halle-eavelyn

This is my 1st cut.  Is the content ok?

Here’s my script:

Hi,

I’m Tom Rasmussen a licensed real estate broker with RE/MAX Action.  Technology continues to change the options available to market and sell a home.  At RE/MAX Action, we continue to be at the fore-front of technology providing the best marketing available to our sellers.  This allows us to sell your home faster and for more money then our competition.

If you value your time & your money, please give me a call to discuss us working together at 630.762.3902.

Thank You.

[Thomas Rasmussen]

@negeen-dargahi  can you review my 30 second informercial

[Halle Eavelyn]

Tom – Great start!

please post in the INFOMERCIAL forum going forward – that’s why I missed these posts in the FAQ forum.

Please go visit that forum and look at some of the infomercial scripts that are there.  ALSO, please watch my Benefits Marketing Video – tell them what’s in it for them right up front – don’t make them wait until the end to hear it!

Post your next draft in the forum and we can’t wait to see it!

[Thomas Rasmussen]

https://photos.app.goo.gl/gmi37sSQL1mdJxVa6

@halle-eavelyn

@negeen-dargahi

[Thomas Rasmussen]

https://youtu.be/mO6Qcwe3rbE

Is this easier for your review purposes?  It’s currently unlisted.  Let me know.

[n d]

Hi @tom-rasmussen! Yes, thank you – the YouTube link is much better to view the video in.

Nice job taking action on your infomercial. Few things:

I’d like to fully review your script before you make another video. Would you mind sending me your script and tagging me in that?

I want us to really perfect it for maximum viewer retention and response.

Feedback on video:

I want to see more of your personality, as this comes off rather recited. Also have someone film you or place your camera on a stack of books or a stand with a nice background.

Please watch Halle’s video on HOW to film –>

The “Video Tips” video is in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bulls eye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.

[Thomas Rasmussen]

Hi,

I’m Tom Rasmussen, a licensed real estate broker with RE/MAX Action.  Technology continues to change the options available to market & sell your home.  We continue to be at the fore front providing the best marketing available to our sellers.  Our listings are currently viewed by 400% more buyers than our nearest competitor.  This allows us to sell your home faster & for more money.  If you value your  time & money like I do, give me a call @ 630.762.3902 so we can discuss working together.  Thanks.

@negeen-dargahi  @halle-eavelyn  Thank You In Advance.

[n d]

Hi @tom-rasmussen! Thank you for sending that over!

Okay, so the line (the only line) that really got my attention was “Our listings are currently viewed by 400% more buyers than our nearest competitor.” I LOVE THAT!

That made me want to pick up my phone and call you.

I want the rest of your infomercial to be that powerful. Think of this as a condensed version of your LI profile. Below is a template you can follow to better organize your thoughts!

******

Same as your LI, how about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…

(after you ask 3 questions)

If this sounds like you… I know EXACTLY how to help.

Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help — which you have great sentences above that can go right here)

(motivating 1 liner)

If you’re wanting _______________ then message or call me TODAY at _________ to see if we’re a good fit.

[Thomas Rasmussen]

Are you feeling anxious about the home you want to sell?

Are you going through a major life event such as a retirement, divorce, death, new baby….you name it!

Or, are you worried about hurting the feelings of a friend, neighbor or even a family member?

If this sounds like you..  I know EXACTLY how to help.

Hi, I’m Tom Rasmussen and I am a licensed real estate broker helping clients just like you for over 15 years.

Our listings are viewed by 400% more buyers than our closest competitor.  This allows us to sell your home faster & for more money.

A signigicant amount of our business comes from sellers that tried with someone that was unable to sell their home.  The friend, the neighbor or the family member with a limited amount of experience or ability.  My Goal is to make you so happy with us that you refer me to others before we’ve even closed on your home.

Just in case you didn’t hear me before.  400% more buyers.  That’s the same thing as saying 4 times more buyers.  That’s HUGE.  The more buyers that look at your home the faster it will sell & the higher the sale price will be.

We accomplish all of this and more in a safe, friendly & curtious environment.  I make my living by making people happy.

If you feel like we should talk, then message me or call TODAY at 630-762-3912 to see if we’re a good fit.

 

@negeen-dargahi  @halle-eavelyn

 

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