Did our graphic designer create your background? If not… please email her and ask her to create a custom background photo for you. The one you currently have is good but not great.
I want you to have “WHAT I DO IN A FEW WORDS”at the beginning of your summary.
I redid your introduction:
WHAT I DO IN A FEW WORDS:
I help people INVEST in real estate AND save tens of $1000s in interest and taxes!
Essentially…
I remove the stress of saving for college, losing a home due to disability – death – divorce AND the fear of outliving your income retirement.
Sounds great, right?
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Grammar error:
“using NONE OF HIS OWN MONEY!!!”
TO:
“without using ANY of HIS own money!!”
Everything else looks great 🙂
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