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https://www.linkedin.com/in/barbara-walton-psy-d-88b1701/
Looking for some feedback on my profile.
Thank you in advance!
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Hi @barbara-walton! Welcome to the program – I’d be happy to provide you with feedback! Below are my comments:
Your current profile photo is really dark and hard to see. Do you have a better photo that is of high quality? If you email it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, ask her to brighten the photo and add a white background for you. Also, try to have a photo of you straight on and not at an angle. Part of your head is also being cut off.
I don’t like your background photo very much. It’s not very inviting. I’d also like you to email Lindsey, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better!
Headline:
Good headline!! I’d also recommend filling out this template to really make it POP!
Want_______ WITHOUT _______?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _______☆☞ Message Me!
About section:
I really like what you’ve written, but when it gets to the Team part, there’s a lot of educating happening and not enough focus on your sales letter.
You HAVE the information, you just need to focus your message more on: WHO you work with, HOW you can help, and WHY they should work with you.
Pro Tip: if you use Kent Littlejohn’s profile outline (we teach it in the program) I believe that will truly transform your message!!
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
CALL TO ACTION – try not to put a call to action in the middle of your message, and just leave It for the end.
If you’re READY for _______ message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!
Awesome work!
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I’ve changed my profile picture to the best possible option that addresses the areas you specified. I am in treatment for cancer and am challenged to get a current photo that isn’t just a little bit scary.
Would you be able to share some of the LI profiles of coaches in the program. I’d love to check out their profiles.
I’m not getting any responses to the Q1 messages that I’m sending, so I’m looking for some additional insight/support regarding what others are doing with their profiles that is working.
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