Anthony Cartategui LI Profile Review

[Anthony Cartategui]

Here is my profile for review.  I am going to offer Linkedin As A Service.

I cam up with other banners.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/anthonycartategui/

Thanks,

Anthony Cartategui

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[n d]

Hi @anthony-cartategui! SUPER job with your profile – I can already tell you’re going to be a rockstar in the program. Below is my feedback:

Profile Photo: Zoom in 50% so we can see more of your smiling face and less white above your head.

Background Photo: Waaaaaay too loud. Keep it clean and professional without too much text. Leave that for your headline and summary. I’d actually recommend you email our graphic designer, Lindsey, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline: Awesome start! I don’t think you need 3 questions having “and and and” in there. How about:

👉 Do You Want Highly QUALIFIED And DAILY Clients? ✅ GUARANTEED ROI ✅ Message Me! 👉

(We don’t want too many capitalized words because it becomes too loud and hard to read)

Summary:

Have the full disclosure after you tell them who you work with. So, ideally, you have the full disclosure right before your call to action at the end.

Everything else looks FAN-tastic 🙂

[Anthony Cartategui]

Good morning @negeen-dargahi.  Did all the changes to the profile.

I have to take a better headshot today and will have that changed out.

So changed the banner and the headline question.

Let me know if am good to go.

Thanks,

Anthony

[n d]

Hi @anthony-cartategui!

Sounds good – you can actually just zoom in more on your profile photo!

Did you receive that background photo from our graphic designer, Lindsey??

If not, I do want to see what she creates for you.

Lindsey@cored.com

Everything else looks SUPER! You’re good to move on!

 

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