Andrew Kehoe: Please review my profile again.

[Andrew Kehoe]

@kent-littlejohn @negeen-dargahi

https://www.linkedin.com/in/andrew-kehoe-305b76240/

[n d]

Hi @andrew-kehoe, thank you for submitting your profile for a review! Below are my comments:

Your background image is good but your profile photo is a little in the way of the image – could you email our graphic designer and have her please update your banner image based on your field of work?

Here is Lindsey’s email: Lindsey@coredm.com

Also, I’d like you to retake your profile photo and make sure it’s at eye level with the camera. If you’d like to keep it, no problem! Send it to Lindsey and have her add a white background for you so it looks a bit more professional.

Headline: 

This looks really good!! Use this template below to really make it pop! (you can copy and paste in the headline slot)

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

About Section:

I love the way you started off your sales letter! Throughout reading, I like you’re content but you do need a bit more information on what you do and how you help your clients.

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with adding more information–  https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

You want to mention HOW you help your clients, WHO you work with, WHY they should work with you, and WHAT you’ll be doing for them.

If you can, please remove the huge chunky information section at the bottom – see if your company will be okay with you removing that from your profile. We’ve had many folks in the program remove theirs without issue. This is taking up a lot of space and you could be using that valuable space for your sales letter.

Lastly, you need a very strong call to action.

Call to action:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

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Once you’ve made these changes, please reply and let me know and i’d love to take another look 🙂

 

 

 

[Andrew Kehoe]

That is Lindseys’ banner image.  I will get a better head shot.  I cannot remove the “big chunky” section at the bottom due to industry regs.  I do have a call to action very similar to your template.  I will add a few details on who-how-and what, and I will redo my headline in an effort to “make it pop”.

[n d]

Hi @andrew-kehoe, yes once you do that let me know because other than the big section at the bottom, you still don’t necessarily have a lot of information.

Here are some examples to refer to (aside from their occupation):

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

https://www.linkedin.com/in/renita-baldwin-realtor%C2%AE-at-quality-choice-solutions-llc-314695197/

 

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