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@negeen-dargahi @kent-littlejohn
I just completed my LinkedIn profile. Could I please get your feedback.
Thank you
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Greetings,
Each time I work on the Profile Accelerator I am unable to finish in one setting, and when I come back to it, it’s gone and I have to start over. How can I prevent this? Am I missing a click somewhere? Going on the 4th attempt.
Thanks in advance!
Fern
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Hi @fern-dallas, I don’t believe there is an alternate way, my best tip is to fill it out the best you can and then submit. I can help you when revising but try your very best to complete it 🙂
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@fern-dallas were you able to finish this??
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Hey @marc-lewyn-2! A really nice job on your profile! Few things…
Email our graphic designer and have her create a cover photo for you, you still need that —>
Lindsey@coredm.comHeadline: This looks good… but it could be better. Filling this template out should help get more specific:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!Summary:
Your content is super informative but it needs organization + a call to action at the end. I want you to copy Kent’s format (the way his profile is outlined and structured)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
I feel it will really help with your flow. Also for your call to action. Add this at the end —->If you’re wanting _______then give me a call TODAY at _____ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
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Allison – how about this?
Want liquidity without a painful sale process, taxes and identity loss? Harvard-trained thought leader can help. PM me!
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Love it, @marc-lewyn-2 🙂
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Greetings,
I just completed my linkin profile. May I get some feedback please?
https://www.linkedin.com/in/dr-fern-dallas-3912b65a/
Thanks in advance!
Fern
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Trying again,
@negeen-dargahi @kent-littlejohn
I just completed my LinkedIn profile. Could I please get your feedback.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/dr-fern-dallas-3912b65a/
Thank you,
Fern
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Hi @fern-dallas!!
A really GREAT job on your profile! Below is my feedback:
- Beautiful profile photo! Can you email it to our graphic designer and have her add in a white background for you? —> Lindsey@coredm.com
Your headline still needs work. Try filling out this template:
Want ______ WITHOUT __________ ☆ EXPERT ________☆☞ MSG Me!
When you have the “message me” in your profile… that doesn’t go there. That would go either in your headline or the END of your summary with a call to action. You’re still trying to grab their attention. But your 3 pain point questions are great!
Everything else looks SUPER! Very proud of you!
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@fern-dallas WOW! Love your LI profile! Makes me want to invest in real estate! when I am able to, you are definitely someone I would want to work with!
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Excellent title, @fern-dallas!! Also, make sure to email your LI profile photo to our graphic designer and have her add a white background for you to really make it professional.
Lindsey@coredm.com
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Hi @frederick-braun! Much better! So, I’m going to re-format your profile below to avoid confusion. All you have to do is copy and paste it into your summary in LI. Let me know if you have questions:
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Do you need a well-knowledged engineer and/or EXPERT Witness withands-onon industrial experience?
Someone who has designed, built and commissioned industrial machinery?
One who is not afraid to get their hands dirty?
If so, I know EXACTLY how to help you!
WHAT I DO IN A FEW WORDS:
I help clients understand the root CAUSE of mechanical, electrical, power, process, and control system failures.
Essentially…
As a Professional Engineer with over thirty years of expertise in forensic engineering and failure investigations of mechanical, electrical and power systems and their control systems…
…if you have the need, I know how to help you.
Yes! You read that right!
Who I Work With:
ATTORNIES:
You will get litigation support assistance by receiving the required answers to the technical issues central to a case. You can receive advanced techniques to further examine the evidence to ensure the BEST understanding of the factors leading to the damage or injury.
I have many years of experience working with both defendants and plaintiffs on a wide variety of issues and have courtroom expertise.
BUSINESS PROFESSIONALS:
With my services, you will get SPECIALISED expertise and procedures to assist companies in determining the pertinent factors that led to the incident or loss.
Business professionals have also been assisted in the repair or replace decisions required for you to return to operation as quickly and cost-effectively as required.
CLAIMS PROFESSIONALS:
With our services, we assist by adding the technical expertise required to settle complex claims resulting from failures or accidents.
Our client base includes a wide variety of Insurance Carriers, Independent Adjusters, and the Attorneys that serve them.
Sound good? PERFECT.
If you need a forensic expert with a broad range of hands-on industrial related experience – Call or text me at (716) 262-8555 or email me at forensic@aicce.com
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https://www.linkedin.com/in/fredbraun/
Thank you so much. It looks and feels so much more powerful.
Thanks again for your efforts!
Fred Braun
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Please review my profile. https://www.linkedin.com/in/colleen-waldoch/
Thank you so very much! I am learning tons!
Colleen Waldoch
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Hi @colleen-waldoch and Tom! Nice job taking action on your profile! Few things:
Great profile photo!
You need a better background photo, something a bit more personalized. Email our graphic designer and tell her a little about your business and what you do – she can help create a background image for your LinkedIn –> Lindsey@coredm.com
Headline:
This could be better worded. How about this:
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆ EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Sarasota, FL☆☞ MSG Me!
Summary:
Please make sure you watch Halle’s BENEFITS MARKETING and BENEFITS MARKETING II videos in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bulls eye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.
There’s far too much emphasis in here on YOU and not enough on THEM – these videos will help you see why it’s important to make it so much more about them!
Here are examples of profiles from realtors in the program you can refer to:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/Please tag me in your revision 🙂
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Hello @negeen-dargahi ,
Please review my profile. All feedback is welcome 🙂
Thanks for your help and expertise!
http://www.linkedin.com/in/jenniferchristenot
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Hi @jennifer-christenot, for future reference, please make a new post – thank you!) Feedback below:
You need a profile photo and a better background photo.
Please have a nice quality photo of yourself looking at the camera smiling.
For your background photo, our graphic designer can create it for you:
All you have to do is:
Email her at Lindsey@coredm.com and tell her a little about your field of business and what you would like and she will help create that for you!
Also, if you can attach a copy of your LI profile photo in the email as well, Lindsey can add in a white background for your profile photo so it really pops!Headline:
This needs work. I want you to focus on either buyers or sellers. Not both, so your message is extremely focused.
Fill this out:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:
I like that you started off with pain point questions but they’re a bit long. Keep it to 3 POWERFUL questions, short and sweet.
I’d like you to copy the format of these profiles in your same field. Really pay attention to the way they not only lead their sales letter but how they format their points and space it out.
Great call to action!!
Tag me in your revision 🙂
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Hi @kammy-thurman, can you make a NEW post in this forum instead of posting in an already existing post?
To do that, go to support forum and back to “LinkedIn Reviews and Questions” and once you click on it, scroll to the very bottom and make a brand new post.
If you have trouble let me know! This is just to stay organized on our end so you get the fastest response.
cc: @amanda-hendrickson
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I just submitted some ideas on my profile, showing the current one that I did through HECP earlier, plus other items. Would you please give me some feedback? Although it’s suggested that I not use retirees as my avatar, as a Realtor I am pursuing the Senior Real Estate niche and have made some inroads in that direction. Using LinkedIn I contacted people who work with seniors – lenders, home health, medical, senior communities, attorneys, movers/move managers, estate sales, etc. In June I received two Senior real estate designations that I feel help people realize my expertise. I’m just now reconnecting with the new HECP, as it was coming into being as I was finishing my webinar. Needless to say I need to redo everything from this point! So your feedback is very welcome!
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For your review:
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Hi Negeen,
sorry I worked on my linkedIN profile some more… ignore my first e-mail to you (-;
Please take a look at this updated profile instead.
Thanks! Melissa
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Please review my Linkedin Profile
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