Alan's Infomercial Draft Review

[Alan Morris]

@negeen-dargahi, @halle-eavelyn

Please check out my video at

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCJofk4hRB7VfB0i8afyVOtA

Thanks,

Alan

[n d]

Hi @alan-morris! Nice job taking action on your infomercial!

Few things:

You sounded good BUT practice a little bit more next time so it doesn’t come off too scripted. It was just way too much reciting, you know?

Also, make sure your phone is horizontal and not vertical.

Before you re-film, please watch this video tips video Halle made. You need a better background as well and she talks more in-depth about that in this video. Here’s how to watch it:

Halle’s video is called: “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bullseye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.

 

[Author]

Posts