Alan's 30 sec Infomercial Draft

[Alan Morris]

@negeen-dargahi, @halle-eavelyn, @kent-littlejohn

Please review and provide feedback on my draft 30-sec infomercial.

 

Does Zillow say your home is worth a million dollars but like homes in your subdivision are selling for $300K?

Are you daunted by the selling process and its uncertainty?

Do you need a proven plan to sell your home and give you peace of mind?

If this sounds like you… I know EXACTLY how to help.

Hi, I’m Alan Morris and I am a licensed Associate Broker helping clients like YOU sell their homes.

Getting Top Dollar in the shortest amount of times requires a proven approach that is purposefully executed.

When you work with me, YOU no longer need to guess what your house will sell for because you will receive a Market Analysis with real comparables that will give you a range to price your home. You will have my team’s expert help in prepping your home, listing, marketing, negotiating, and supporting you across the finish line. You will be in the loop the ENTIRE time. You heard right! We will take the daunt out of daunted.

Sounds great right?

If you’re READY to sell your home for TOP dollar, then message or call me TODAY at 520-234-4168 or email me at themorristeam@cox.net to see if we’re a good fit.

 

 

 

[n d]

Hi @alan-morris! Really nice work on your infomercial!!

Below is my feedback:

I re-worded and rearranged your pain point questions – let me know how you like it:

Do you need a proven plan to get your home listing in front of qualified buyers?

Does Zillow say your home is worth a million dollars but similar homes in your subdivision are selling for $300K?

Have you been daunted by the selling process and its uncertainty?

This sentence below is quite long, can you break this up?

“When you work with me, YOU no longer need to guess what your house will sell for because you will receive a Market Analysis with real comparables that will give you a range to price your home.”

I’m not sure how I feel about this line “We will take the daunt out of daunted.” — maybe reconsider?

Everything else looks great!

[Alan Morris]

@negeen-dargahi, @halle-eavelyn, @kent-littlejohn

Thanks for the feedback Negeen, below is for your last review implementing your suggestions.

Do you need a proven plan to get your home listing in front of qualified buyers?

Does Zillow say your home is worth a million dollars but similar homes in your subdivision are selling for $300K?

Have you been daunted by the selling process and its uncertainty?

If this sounds like you… I know EXACTLY how to help.

Hi, I’m Alan Morris and I am a licensed Associate Broker helping clients like YOU sell their homes.

Getting Top Dollar in the shortest amount of times requires a proven approach that is purposefully executed.

When you work with me, YOU no longer need to guess what your house will sell for. You will receive a Market Analysis with real comparables that will give you a range to price your home. You will have my team’s expert help in staging your home, marketing, negotiating, and supporting you across the finish line. You will be in the loop the ENTIRE time. You heard right! We have YOUR back!

Sounds great right?

If you’re READY to sell your home for TOP dollar, then message or call me TODAY at 520-234-4168 or email me at themorristeam@cox.net to see if we’re a good fit.

[n d]

Looks great @alan-morris!! Proud of you!

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