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Hi @byron-corbitt! Welcome to the program 🙂
Nice job taking massive imperfect action on your profile! Below is my feedback:
Great profile photo! Can you send it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, and have her add a white background for you?? This will help it pop.
I don’t like your background photo very much. It’s not very inviting nor is it related to your business. I’d also like you to email our graphic designer and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better.
Headline (words under name):
What you have written is attention-grabbing but I wanted to clean it up a bit for you!
Are You STRUGGLING Finding Hope and Opportunities?☆ EXPERT _______ Helping Clients _______☞ Message Me
Summary:
Dr. Byron – I am not very clear on what your business is and WHO you work with and HOW you help your clients.
This means that you need to provide better information and better organization to lead them effortlessly through your sales letter.
Please refer to these profiles from other realtors in the program. Copy the FORMAT/outline and pay attention to the way they lead you through their profile.
They detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/paulgennuso/
You could start your summary off asking 3 short and sweet and POWERFUL pain point questions! Then, you can lead into what you do, WHO you work with, HOW you help clients, and WHY they should work with you.
better organized!
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Call to action:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!
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