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      Kelly Armstrong
      Participant
        @kelly@bewholeent.com

        Hello,

        I have a credit repair/restoration business called; Be Whole Financial Enterprise.

        Provided are my 4 questions for review:

        1 – What is your core business?

        2 – How are you getting your clients?

        3 – If I could provide you with a service that could help your clients without you spending more time or money; would you be interested?

        4 – Please reply back with your mobile number and a few time windows where we can connect today or tomorrow.

        Looking forward to your feedback.

        Thanks,

        Kelly

         

      • #24796

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi, @kelly-armstrong-2!! This is a really great start on your 4 questions! Few little changes I’d like you to make:

          Your Q1 can be even more personalized/powerful by adding in their name, like this:

          “Great to connect, [NAME]! What’s your core business?”

          Q2 is a bit too straightforward. How about a ‘yes’ or ‘no’ question.

          “2. Fantastic. Are you planning/wanting to grow in 2018?”

          or even:

          “2) Perfect. What’s your main focus this year?”

          Good Q3!

          Q3 can even be:

          “3. Love it. If I could show you an easy way to help your clients without you spending more time or money, would you have interest?

          Q4 can be stronger:

          4) Fantastic. What are a few time windows that you have available tomorrow to chat?

          5) 2pm works. What’s your mobile?

           

        • #25083

          Kelly Armstrong
          Participant
            @kelly@bewholeent.com

            Thank you

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