Hi, @mario-kruja! Nice job taking action. Those need work. I know you’re a realtor. How about you use these great questions Kent came up with. These set of questions will do wonders for you!

Q1: Great to connect ‘NAME’… what’s your core business?

Q2: Perfect! Do you live in [YOUR MARKET]?

Q3: Fantastic. How many years have you lived here?

That’s great! Let’s chat for a few minutes. I have a fairly big network that may benefit you.

Q4: What are a few time windows that you have tomorrow?

2pm works perfect

Q5: What’s your mobile?

Great. I’ll call you at 2pm.

Talk soon,

[INSERT YOUR NAME HERE]

SIDE NOTE:

I was looking at your LinkedIn profile and you NEED a better headline (words under your name).

Use this:

Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Phoenix☆☞ Message Me!

Summary:

Your first paragraph is CHUNKY. Break it up like this:

WHAT I DO IN 18 WORDS OR LESS!

“I deliver to YOU in-depth real estate services in Phoenix area.”

Essentially…

I allow you to focus on YOU INSTEAD of searching and negotiating and I eliminate the STRESS of where your next property is coming from …

WHO DO I WORK WITH? Individuals, Families, Investors, Ranch Properties.

Want an example?

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Hope this helps 🙂