6 years, 1 month ago-
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Hi @mark-harrison, NICE work on your infomercial! I have a few questions.
You currently have 4 topics and 4 infomercial scripts made.
Do all of them all have the same outcome? Do you do the SAME thing for all of those?
The reason I ask is this:
Ideally, you want ONE short and sweet VIDEO (after your script is approved) to put on your LinkedIn page. Are you wanting to make 4 separate videos? Some of your scripts are still very long and it runs on and on and on.
How about we combine all of your scripts into ONE POWERFUL infomercial.
For instance, get rid of the dragged out list:
“Are you wanting a 30% bonus added to your IRA, 401k, TSP, Roth, or cash account?”
^ that’s a grocery list already and it’s the first question.
How about:
“Are you wanting to add a 30% BONUS to your financial account?”
“Do you want to remove all the hurdles keeping you from a lifetime of financial security?”
“Are you wanting to help your child get a 4-year degree without facing the debt monster?”
If you answered YES to one or more of these questions… I know EXACTLY how to help you!
INTRO – Hi, I’m NAME and I’m POSITION 1 sentence MAX
BENEFITS (3 – tell them what’s in it for them when they work with you!) 3 sentences MAX
CTA – Call them To Action and tell them what steps to take next to see if you’re a fit 1 sentence MAX.
Remember, SIZZLE, NOT STEAK.
You’ve got this!!
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