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      Amy Clark
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        @amysellsutah@gmail.com

        Do you need to move, but are afraid to sell your house before you’ve secured a new one?

        Are you confused about the current real estate market?

        If this sound like you.. i know exactly how to help.

        Hi, I’m Amy Clark, and i am a Realtor helping clients realize their real estate goals.

        With my guaranteed perfect timing system, you never end up homeless. I guarantee to secure your next home before you close on your current home, or you can cancel your contract and keep your home.

        I know this business and how to get it done faster, get you top dollar for your home and eliminate the hassles.

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        Anonymous
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          @amy-clark Awesome job with this! I really like that you started with pain point questions!

          There are only a few things you need to change.

          1. You use the word “home” too many times in this sentence. Re-word it. “I guarantee to secure your next home before you close on your current home, or you can cancel your contract and keep your home.”
          2. Let’s make this 2 sentences: “I know this business and how to get it done faster, get you top dollar for your home and eliminate the hassles.” —I know this business and how to get it done faster! I will get you top dollar for your home and eliminate all the hassle!

          TAG ME IN YOUR REVISION

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