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Hello, Here is the script for my 30-second infomercial. Please review and comment.
Thank you!
Jim
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Hi, this is Jim O’Donnell, and you probably know that this is the best time in US History to sell your home. So you are thinking “I’d love to cash in, but where would I go?” Well at 72soldPlus you can stay home. That’s right with 72SoldPlus, you can now sell at the absolute top of the market, deposit your check then stay in your home for up to six months. Thinking about selling, go to 72soldplus.com, put in your address, get a higher price for your home then stay for up to six months at 72soldPlus.com.
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Hi there, @james-odonnell! This is a really good start! I want you to fill your information into this template below to better showcase your points. I wouldn’t say the website until the very end of the infomercial – it’s sort of interrupting the flow of your message.
How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…
Are you WANTING _________?
Do you NEED __________?Want __________?
(after you ask 3 questions)
If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!
Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.
(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)
(you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)
If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.
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Hello,
How is this updated with suggestions:
Are you thinking of selling your home?
Do you need to have a find a new home in order to confidently sell?
Dou you want to be certain that all the buyers in the market are competing for your home?
If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!
I am Jim O’Donnell, and you probably know that this is the best time in US History to sell your home.
So you are thinking “I’d love to cash in, but where would I go?” Well at 72soldPlus you can stay home. That’s right with 72SoldPlus, you can now sell at the absolute top of the market, deposit your check then stay in your home for up to six months.
Thinking about selling, go to 72soldplus.com, put in your address, get a higher price for your home then stay for up to six months at 72soldPlus.com.
If you want to sell without worrying about finding your next home, then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit or go directly to 72soldplus.com.
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Hey there, @james-odonnell! This is looking so much better. Again, there’s a lot of mention of “72SoldPlus” – you say it 5x in your message.
Replace that with comments like:
“I help YOU find qualified buyers to your home” “when clients like you work with me, I make sure to __________ so you can focus on _____”
“That’s right, with my proven method and resources, you can now sell at the absolute top of the market, deposit your check then stay in your home for up to six months.”
Everything else looks great!!
Here are your next steps:
Halle made a very helpful video on how to record your infomercial.
It is called “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy Module.
Here is also an example of what it should sound like. Of course, this is a high-quality version but yours does NOT have to be this
high quality. Just look at the angle of the video and the lighting.
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