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March 30, 2021 at 11:26 am #46153
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Do you want to sell the large, longtime family home and relocate to a smaller “safer environment”?
Do you need someone to safeguard you or you loved one in the process?
-Want protection from the extraordinarily stressful, high speed, and legally complex process that is common in real estate today?
If you answered yes that is exactly what I can do for you or your loved one! I safeguard the home seller during the transaction process I ensure that they stay in charge of their affairs at the same time.
Essentially…I have the SKILL and KNOWLEDGE to deal with such issues as multiple contract offers on the house, Renting back the home after closing home health care, Bridge Loans, downsizing, garage sales/estate sales, communicating with adult children, loss of independence, home repair/remodeling and preserving legacy.
Message me here on Linked In to see if we are a good fit and can work together.
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March 31, 2021 at 1:17 pm #46166
Hi @larry-clarke if you could mention as one of the pain points something about retirement or elderly home owner, that would help specify exactly what you do. OR add it somewhere in your explanation paragraph.
I help clients like YOU _________.
Everything else looks perfect.
Here are next steps:
Halle made a very helpful video on how to record your infomercial.
It is called “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy Module.
Here is also an example of what it should sound like. Of course, this is a high-quality version but yours does NOT have to be this
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April 10, 2021 at 12:42 pm #46278
resubmit for comment 04/10/21
Are you no longer able to maintain the large family home and need to relocate to a smaller “safer environment”?
Do you need someone to safeguard you or your aging loved one in the process?
Would you like to be protected from the extraordinarily stressful, high speed, and legally complex process that is common in real estate today?
If you answered yes that is exactly what I can do for you or your loved one! I safeguard the home seller during the transaction process I ensure that they stay in charge of their affairs at the same time.
Essentially…I have the SKILL and KNOWLEDGE to deal with such issues as multiple contract offers on the house, Renting back the home after closing home health care, Bridge Loans, downsizing, garage sales/estate sales, communicating with adult children, loss of independence, home repair/remodeling and preserving legacy.
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April 12, 2021 at 10:27 am #46285
Hi @larry-clarke, that looks great, you just need to end your infomercial with a call to action!
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