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September 12, 2018 at 8:58 am #22404
Hi Negeen,
Here’s my draft. It’s closer to a minute. Thanks in advance for suggestions!
Are you waking up anxious and overwhelmed by the idea of getting through your day, much less living your passions?
Do you have panic attacks?
Or maybe you get stressed and then angry or reactive with your loved ones?
If this sounds like you… I know EXACTLY how to help.
I’m Kathryn and I can help you shift anxiety, stress, and overwhelm from the center of your life and have self trust, love, and care there instead.
We will find what works for you. I will help you re-build your external support system. Then you will have the tools and the confidence to shift anxiety and overwhelm, and take care of and love yourself. And then the trust, freedom and framework to choose how YOU want to move forward.
After being sexually assaulted, I went from having regular panic attacks, to no panic attacks and to the skills and confidence to always return to love and self trust, even if I start to feel anxious.
If you want this, I can help you. E-mail me at Kathryn@wholelovingwellness.com or call me at 317-514-1462 TODAY to see if we’re a good fit. With love!
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September 12, 2018 at 12:14 pm #22456
Hi @kathryn-rimstidt, this was a really great start! I have a few tips to help really make this flow.
A really nice job with your pain point questions! I love that you know exactly who you’re talking to. When you’re asking them, though, try not to give too many options in one questions like this one:
“Or maybe you get stressed and then angry or reactive with your loved ones?”
I recommend keeping your questions short and sweet like:
Are you waking up anxious and overwhelmed by the idea of getting through the day?
Do you find yourself having frequent panic attacks?
Or maybe you take your stress and anger out on your loved ones…
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This next sentence as revised:
“Hi, I’m Kathryn and I know EXACTLY how to help you shift anxiety, stress, and overwhelm into self-love and trust.”
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There’s a lot of “and then, x,y,z”
Really restructure your sentence to clarify your point without listing ways they benefit.
Instead, lead them to HOW you help.
“I’ve BEEN where you are. I’ve been sexually assaulted, having regular panic attacks, to no panic attacks!
Yes, you heard that right! I now have the skills and confidence to always return to love and self-trust, even if I start to feel anxious.
So if this is something you want to have TODAY then etc…
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I don’t like “if you want this, I can help you” — you can make this a better call to action.
If you’re READY for ________ then message me here on LinkedIn TODAY to ________.
Tag me in your revision!
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September 12, 2018 at 4:38 pm #22513
Thanks so much, @negeen-dargahi! I’m not 100% sure about the part I put in bold which I was writing in reponses to your suggesting I focus on “How” we will do this. So, let me know about that or any other suggestions. I’ve also gone ahead and made a version and I’m posting to LinkedIn. I’m not sure if just recording myself saying this is the “best” plan/any suggestions there with my “presentation.” And so, if you can look at my profile as well, that would be great.
I don’t have it posted yet, but plan to do it just as-is as soon as it downloads into my photos, then onto the computer, and then download to youtube with an edited version if you have suggestions to change the next time. I did notice that I’m looking aside at the script a bit and so keeping my eyes in the same spot most of the time is probably better, in terms of presentation. linkedin.com/in/kathryn-eh-rimstidt
Thanks so much!,
KJathyrn
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September 12, 2018 at 5:15 pm #22540
Oops! @negeen-dargahi. I’ve been focusing on why the video won’t download (Technology glitch I am giving up on for now and hoping will fix itself later) and didn’t realize I didn’t put the script content above. So, if you look on linkedin and it’s not there yet, please can you go ahead and read below and I will let you know here when it is up if you’ve replied already by then. Thanks!
Questions from above:
I’m not 100% sure about the part I put in bold which I was writing in response to your suggesting I focus on “How” we will do this. So, let me know about that or any other suggestions. I’ve also gone ahead and made a version and I’m posting to LinkedIn. I’m not sure if just recording myself saying this is the “best” plan/any suggestions there with my “presentation.” And so, if you can look at my profile as well, that would be great.
I don’t have it posted yet, but plan to do it just as-is as soon as it downloads into my photos (as mentioned above, this still isn’t working in spite of different things I’ve tried), then onto the computer LinkedIn profile. I did notice that I’m looking aside at the script a bit and so keeping my eyes in the same spot most of the time is probably better, in terms of presentation. linkedin.com/in/kathryn-eh-rimstidt
Here’s the new script:
Are you waking up anxious and overwhelmed by the idea of getting through the day?
Do you find yourself having frequent panic attacks?
Or maybe you take your stress and anger out on your loved ones…Hi, I’m Kathryn and I know EXACTLY how to help you shift anxiety, stress, and overwhelm into self-love and trust.
I’ve BEEN where you are. I’ve been sexually assaulted, having regular panic attacks, to no panic attacks!
Yes, you heard that right! I now have the skills and confidence to always return to love and self-trust, even if I start to feel anxious.
So if this is something you want to have TODAY then contact me. I will share with you the tools you need to shift anxiety and overwhelm and we will practice them so you can find what works for you. You will learn practical ways to build self trust and take care of yourself. And, I will give you a framework and scripts to build your external support system.
If you’re READY for anxiety to no longer rule you, and to trust yourself, then message me here on LinkedIn TODAY, or give me a call at 317-514-1462.
With loving care,
KathrynThanks, Negeen!!
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September 12, 2018 at 5:44 pm #22547
Hi @kathryn-rimstidt, the infomercial is meant to be recorded, not added as text in your profile. You can, of course, make a post but don’t add this in your summary.
Go through the modules slowly so you don’t get lost.
I really like your revised infomercial! Sounds great!
Please watch this if you have questions about filming:
Watch Halle’s video called: “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bullseye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.
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September 12, 2018 at 5:59 pm #22551
I understand that it is to be recorded. I just wasn’t able to, like I said did it from my phone to the computer. I might need to do it directly. Usually I can download from my phone but it doesn’t seem to be working right now. Thank you for the tips from Halle I will take a look at those.
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