Hey there, @jim-pennock! That was a good start but I want you to add a little more substance to your message. What may be easier is to fill out this template below to better grasp people’s attention.

How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…

Are you WANTING _________?
Do you NEED __________?

Want __________?

(after you ask 3 questions)

If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

(you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

Hi there, @jim-pennock! This looks much better.

Let’s make your questions a little bit stronger. You’re on the right path!

Are you WANTING the RIGHT insurance? What type of insurance do you provide?? Or is it general. Specificity is key.

Do you NEED more TIME and MONEY? Specify on time like:

Do you NEED a financial plan UNIQUE to your needs so you can save Money AND valuable time?

Want a Friendly, experienced Insurance Profession to Help?

Friendly is good to say but also it would be even better with “knowledgeable” or “EXPERT” or “Specialist”

OR

Want an experienced insurance professional to guide you every step of the way?

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Once you make those changes, your message will be stronger and you’ll be ready to film 🙂

• This reply was modified 3 years, 3 months ago by n d.