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    • #19775

      Mark Harrison
      Participant
        @completebenefits@windstream.net

        Here are 12 Ads I have prepared.   Update me when you can what you think.   It reformated the titles when I pasted it and underlined some of the titles and there are no underline options above to remove them, but everything else looks like it copied and pasted fine.

        Higher Quality of Life                                 https://vimeo.com/285220263

        I can help save it all!                                   https://vimeo.com/285200904

        Your money won’t run out!                     https://vimeo.com/285193967

        why risk it                                                       https://vimeo.com/285190828

        Save your wealth                                          https://vimeo.com/285188604

        College without loans                                https://vimeo.com/285180347

        The Good Life                                                https://vimeo.com/285178902

        Comfortable living for life                      https://vimeo.com/285159175

        Like to get a financial advantage?       https://vimeo.com/285158427

        3 Times the Money                                        https://vimeo.com/81536741

        30% Bonus                                                  https://vimeo.com/81536741

        No Tax                                                           https://vimeo.com/285016493

      • #19803

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @mark-harrison please remind me, have I approved your infomercial script??

          If not, I want to approve it before you record. 12 videos is a LOT. So let’s make sure the script is perfect before you record, okay?

           

        • #19814

          Mark Harrison
          Participant
            @completebenefits@windstream.net

            Hi Negeen,  I sent the links to the videos yes they are already done.   I’m updating my website.   If you need written scripts I can do that.   It will take some time because I recorded them on my voice recorder.

          • #19850

            n d
            Keymaster
              @negeen@coredm.com

              Hi @mark-harrison – yes. To save you time, HERE is the outline for a good infomercial script. I recommend you fill it out and then once I approve, please go ahead and film.

              Script:

              Ask 3 pain point questions your clients face (short and sweet):

              (after asking 3 questions)

              If this sounds like you… I know EXACTLY how to help.

              Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

              (2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help — which you have great sentences above that can go right here)

              (motivating 1 liner)

              If you want _______________ then message or call me TODAY at _________ to see if we’re a good fit.

               

            • #20060

              Mark Harrison
              Participant
                @completebenefits@windstream.net

                Here are the first few Ad Scripts.   Please update me.   Thanks

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              • #20066

                Mark Harrison
                Participant
                  @completebenefits@windstream.net

                  Here is another Ad.   Please update me.  Thanks

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                • #20172

                  n d
                  Keymaster
                    @negeen@coredm.com

                    Hi @mark-harrison

                    I’m not crazy about your intro. Right now you’re just starting it off by giving facts and then asking like 8 questions. Please follow the outline I provided.

                    Ask 3 POWERFUL pain point questions your perfect client experiences.

                    Are you wanting ______??

                    Do you NEED ________?

                    Want _________?

                    If you answered YES to those questions… I know EXACTLY how to help.

                    Hi, I’m @mark-harrison and I am a __________ helping clients like YOU _________.

                    (3-5 sentences on EXACTLY how you plan on helping them)

                    (1-2 sentences on why you’re the man for the job)

                    CALL TO ACTION that is alpha and right to the point.

                    If you want _______________ then message or call me TODAY at _________ to see if we’re a good fit.

                     

                     

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