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August 16, 2018 at 11:44 am #19775
Here are 12 Ads I have prepared. Update me when you can what you think. It reformated the titles when I pasted it and underlined some of the titles and there are no underline options above to remove them, but everything else looks like it copied and pasted fine.
Higher Quality of Life https://vimeo.com/285220263
I can help save it all! https://vimeo.com/285200904
Your money won’t run out! https://vimeo.com/285193967
why risk it https://vimeo.com/285190828
Save your wealth https://vimeo.com/285188604
College without loans https://vimeo.com/285180347
The Good Life https://vimeo.com/285178902
Comfortable living for life https://vimeo.com/285159175
Like to get a financial advantage? https://vimeo.com/285158427
3 Times the Money https://vimeo.com/81536741
30% Bonus https://vimeo.com/81536741
No Tax https://vimeo.com/285016493
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August 16, 2018 at 12:35 pm #19803
Hi @mark-harrison please remind me, have I approved your infomercial script??
If not, I want to approve it before you record. 12 videos is a LOT. So let’s make sure the script is perfect before you record, okay?
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August 16, 2018 at 12:53 pm #19814
Hi Negeen, I sent the links to the videos yes they are already done. I’m updating my website. If you need written scripts I can do that. It will take some time because I recorded them on my voice recorder.
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August 16, 2018 at 2:29 pm #19850
Hi @mark-harrison – yes. To save you time, HERE is the outline for a good infomercial script. I recommend you fill it out and then once I approve, please go ahead and film.
Script:
Ask 3 pain point questions your clients face (short and sweet):
(after asking 3 questions)
If this sounds like you… I know EXACTLY how to help.
Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.
(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help — which you have great sentences above that can go right here)
(motivating 1 liner)
If you want _______________ then message or call me TODAY at _________ to see if we’re a good fit.
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August 17, 2018 at 10:18 am #20060
Here are the first few Ad Scripts. Please update me. Thanks
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August 17, 2018 at 10:19 am #20066
Here is another Ad. Please update me. Thanks
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August 17, 2018 at 2:27 pm #20172
I’m not crazy about your intro. Right now you’re just starting it off by giving facts and then asking like 8 questions. Please follow the outline I provided.
Ask 3 POWERFUL pain point questions your perfect client experiences.
Are you wanting ______??
Do you NEED ________?
Want _________?
If you answered YES to those questions… I know EXACTLY how to help.
Hi, I’m @mark-harrison and I am a __________ helping clients like YOU _________.
(3-5 sentences on EXACTLY how you plan on helping them)
(1-2 sentences on why you’re the man for the job)
CALL TO ACTION that is alpha and right to the point.
If you want _______________ then message or call me TODAY at _________ to see if we’re a good fit.
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