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Are you tired of renting? Do you want to reap the benefit of homeownership? To get started in the right direction you must have the best people in your circle of trust. Don’t make the costly mistake by NOT having buyer representation or a home buying plan in place.
I have helped families own a home in as little as 3 weeks or given them direction to own a home in the future. My experience as a past mortgage banker and now top-ranked Realtor for RE/MAX Legends will help put your mind at ease. Why? I know both sides of a real estate transaction and the best people to help you along the way.
Want to own the home of your dreams? Don’t miss out on an opportunity to speak with me personally.
Don’t ever go unrepresented when buying a home. Especially a new construction home. Call me today for your free guide to homeownership.
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Hi @alan-daniel! This is a really great start on your infomercial, few tiny tweaks:
Your first paragraph is good but I would add 1 more pain point question after the two you have and then say:
If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!
Hi, I’m Alan Daniel and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.
I have helped families own a home in as little as 3 weeks or given them direction to own a home in the future.
My experience as a past mortgage banker and now top-ranked Realtor for RE/MAX Legends will help put your mind at ease. What’s better? I know BOTH sides of a real estate transaction and the best people to help you along the way.
Want to own the home of your dreams?
If you’re READY for _______ Call me today for your free guide to homeownership.
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Are you tired of renting? Do you want to reap the benefit of homeownership?
I have helped families own a home in as little as 3 weeks or given them direction to own a home in the future. My experience and knowledge as a former mortgage banker and now top-ranked Realtor for RE/MAX Legends is what sets me apart from other realtors.
Which is better, renting or owning the home of your dreams?
If you answered is owning a home, then NOW IS THE TIME TO GET STARTED! Don’t make the costly mistake by NOT having a home buying plan in place. Contact me, “Alan Daniel” your local home-buying expert today for your free guide to homeownership.
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Hi @alan-daniel, NICE work! I do want you to introduce yourself after your pain points so people know who you are!
So it would look like this:
Are you TIRED of losing money from renting?
Do you WANT to reap the benefit of homeownership?
Do you NEED __________?
(after you ask 3 questions)
If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!
Hi, I’m Alan and I am a Realtor helping clients _______.
I have helped families own a home in as little as 3 weeks or given them direction to own a home in the future.
My experience and knowledge as a former mortgage banker and now top-ranked Realtor for RE/MAX Legends is what sets me apart from other realtors.
Which is better, renting or owning the home of your dreams?
If you answered is owning a home, then NOW IS THE TIME TO GET STARTED!
Don’t make the costly mistake by NOT having a home buying plan in place. Contact me, “Alan Daniel” your local home-buying expert today for your free guide to homeownership.
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Are you tired of losing money renting? Do you want to reap the benefit of homeownership? Do you need an expert to guide you along the way?
If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!
Hi, I’m Alan Daniel and I am a local Realtor helping thousand of family’s become homeowner in the Atlanta area.
My experience and knowledge as a former mortgage banker and now top-ranked Realtor for RE/MAX Legends is what sets me apart from other realtors.
What is better, renting or owning the home of your dreams?
If you answered is owning a home, then NOW IS THE TIME TO GET STARTED!
Don’t make the costly mistake by NOT having a home buying plan in place. Contact me, “Alan Daniel” your local home-buying expert today for your free guide to homeownership.
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GREAT, @alan-daniel! You’re good to move on!
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