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Hi there @janet-mchugh-2! This is an awesome start – I love all of the specific numbers you provided in your infomercial! I’m going to add a fun template for you to fill in below because I think you could use more “alpha energy” in your message as well as a bit more content.
ow about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…
Are you WANTING _________?
Do you NEED __________?
Want __________?
(after you ask 3 questions)
If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!
Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.
(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)
(you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)
If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.
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