LI profile review – High End Client https://app.hecp.com Member's Only Training Thu, 06 Dec 2018 17:33:10 +0000 en-US hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.5.8 https://app.hecp.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/03/cropped-HECP-SoundCloud-32x32.jpg LI profile review – High End Client https://app.hecp.com 32 32 2nd LinkedIn Profile submission https://app.hecp.com/forums/topic/2nd-linkedin-profile-submission/ Thu, 06 Dec 2018 17:33:10 +0000 http://df4ccde462.nxcli.net/forums/topic/2nd-linkedin-profile-submission/ Asking for 2nd review please after so many changes and upgrades!. 🙂 About to start the Barker 20 so this is important for me to get right. :->

https://www.linkedin.com/in/carolalinden/

I’ve made the WONDERFUL changes you suggested. Also.

  1. Got rid of word MILLENNIALS. They hate being called that. Glad I found THAT out.
  2. TRIED to do headshot as white background. Did not work. Looked like a brown football
    helmet on my head, as in STEEL MAGNOLIAS. LOL My photographer said he would do a new
    shoot to get a white background. Didn’t want you to think I hadn’t listened and tried to comply.
  3. Got phone number out of heading.
  4. Made text more focused on THEM and THEIR PROBLEM and how I have a SOLUTION. Please let me know if I did that well enough.

Please also read the description for SANDBOX ACADEMY under the Employment section. That’s the new part of my business that I’m using this program to get traffic for. I need site traffic to get these courses to Millennials who will benefit from them Corporate American is doing NOTHING for them. This is NOT RIGHT. I’m trying to offer Millennial employees and managers an affordable answer to the near total lack of talent development now.

THANKS FOR ALL YOUR GREAT HELP!!!! I’m so proud of how you’ve upped my game with this new LI look and content. You guys do superb work!!!

Blessings,

Carol

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