Hi @lily-rosenfield, this looks so much better and nice job with your 3 questions!

Now, the places you put fingers pointing, no one will see that since you’ll be reading off of your script.

Instead, I want you to elaborate and form complete sentences where the pointer fingers are so you can film yourself reading it off easily.

Instead of “if you’re wanting an appointment” ask them something they’ll actually want. Like… “if you’re ready to get your house in front of qualified buyers”

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