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Below is my 30-second infomercial. I would greatly appreciate your feedback.
Have you considered increasing your net worth through real estate investment? If so, call us today at (858) 224-2607.
We are an equity management company that invests in commercial properties in emerging markets across the U.S where returns are the highest. We target cities in emerging markets that are experiencing significant Job, Business and Population growth. We seek properties in high demand and desirable areas with value-add and strategic improvements in order to unlock and maximize true market value.
Our Mission is to bring small and large investors together so they can achieve the same buying power and benefits enjoyed by larger investors in the purchase of commercial real estate.
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Hi @rhea-tobin, nice job taking massive imperfect action on your infomercial! You need a bit more structure and less “CALL ME NOW…. here is what I do”
So, I want you to think of it as a condensed version of your LI profile.
Choose 3 POWERFUL short and sweet questions, like you have above but really empathize with your audience. And pick 3.
Then you can say your line —>
“If you answered yes to any one of these questions I have solutions for you. Hi, I’m @rhea-tobin and I am a ______ helping clients ______.
(I want you to write 3-5 sentences on how you serve them)
Call to action which you NEED —->
If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______or you can message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
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